Wow, that was such a rip-off.
Okay, listen. Don't ever submit something like that again. Now I'm not discouraging you from making more claymations, as your animation skills show a lot of potential, but please for the love of God, do something different. Seriously, there are endless numbers of claymations now-a-days that are Knox-rip offs. If you're going to make a claymation, please sculpt characters, make it your own. Don't just take blue blobs and manipulate them around, add some detail. Also, backrounds would be nice. Secondly, the last person was right, you should not be doing the voices. Also, please make the story a little original, not just pure randomness like Knox's clay movies. Make it your own style, you know. Make a story or something. Listen, as far as animating goes, you're pretty good, keep it up, but please take my suggestions. Also, you have to get rid of that trial thing.