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[SonicHunt]

Not bad.

Pretty neat animation. The only real problem with this was that it was real tough to follow. Also, adding voices might have been good.

[STICKMANIA]

Not as bad as I thought it would be.

Something like this really needs sound. Just tell your brother to work on adding sound and maybe adding a little story (I had no idea what was going on, but sound could have helped) and he should be good. Good luck!

AndrewM responds:

i agree, but given the pc system we where worki ng on ( 2gb hard drive, 64mb ram) and no sound sofware. he didnt have much of a choice. anyways Thanks

[Clayland - ClayFighter]

A little disappointed, but not bad.

I liked this one, only it wasn't as good as I thought. When I saw that it was about Clayfighter, I was excited. I thought "Gee, what a neat idea to make a claymation about Clayfighter," however, the actual clayfighter sequence was not that good. Animation overall was pretty good, and I really appreciate that you made clay people and backrounds. The cartoon was pretty funny. I would have liked this a lot more had the Clayfighter sequence been longer and done a little better. Overall, nice job.

[Rockman!! Next Attack]

Thanks for the free protection points!

How could you have a doubt in your mind that this won't get 200 votes? This is so good I would bet money that this will get a score higher then a 4.00. One of the best flashes I have seen in a while. Brilliant animation, nicely drawn, cool style. The only thing that I can think of that some people may not like so much is that this seems like more of a preview of what's to come, because it doesn't have a story. That doesn't bother me one bit, but I could see how maybe somebody might criticize that (probably not). Also, the intro was really something. I was ready to give you a good score as soon as I saw it. Please continue this series, I bet it'll be awesome!

[-Robot Chicken Attempt-]

Nice stop-motion.

That was a good stop-motion, even if it wasn't your first attempt. This is waaaaaaaay too short to be on Newgrounds, but I protected it because the animation was very good. It did have a sort of Robot Chicken-esque style, but Robot Chicken is several shorts put together. If you continued to do shorts like this, I suggest making many of them and putting them together. Also, nice job on the lip syncing. I hope to see some more from you.

[Clay Penguin Shooting]

Poorly made.

This wasn't the worst claymation I've seen. At least the voices and plot weren't terrible/knock offs. My real beef is that a claymation should look better, it shouldn't be a bunch of poorly made clay figures on your table. Animation isn't art, it's something that you do with art, and unfortunately, too many ordinary people are dabbling into the arts, and that's just not the way it should be.

TurboJ responds:

I use those clapy figures because they are simple. No eyes, no fingers, no mouths (unless I add them on), but I'm making more advanced characters for future movies, when I'm a better animator.

[SMW Bloopers(Cazater)]

Nice idea my butt.

This is the most unoriginal idea out there. Why are people okay with doing something that has been done to death. Honestly, people out there, stop making Mario bloopers, it's done. All the jokes have been done, most of them pretty poorly. I can't believe that there are people actually saving these mario bloopers, it's rediculous, you people who save these cartoons are indulging in mediocrity. Anyway, aside from this being one of the stalest ideas out there, it was so unfunny that it hurt.

[the true eggo commercial]

Screw you, I'll blam this if I want.

Don't expect us not to blam something if we don't like it. I don't think this is good at all, and three days is nothing. The project that I am working on right now has taken me 7 months. All of a sudden, three days doesn't seem so bad, now does it. Anyway, now that I have gotten the ranting out of the way, I will give some constructive criticism. The cartoon does not look terrible, although it is short, and completely pointless. That is the real problem is that this cartoon has absolutely no point. Now if you put in a little more work into your next cartoon, think it through a little better, then perhaps, your next cartoon will be good. I'm not saying you're no good, I just thing that you need to work on your style a little, and you need to learn to accept the fact that some people are not going to like your work.

[Super Mario: TV Breaker]

Are you kidding me?

You mixed SMB with SMW. You had the song from SMB, and the sound effects from SMW, and that really bothered me. I mean, did you do this on purpose? Anyway, the cartoon was alright, that mix thing really REALLY bothered me. I liked the Wario poster in the backround, it was really neat.

[Clay, music]

This deserves a higher score.

It was a little sloppy in some parts, mostly camera work, but also your hand was visible a few times, which is really bad, but I am willing to overlook that because the animation was good, and it had an interesting style. I have to admit it didn't make sense, but I still thought it was pretty good. Just work on keeping your hand(s) out of the shot (It wasn't a lot, and it was very minor, but it is still a problem), maybe improve the video quality, and I'm sure your next video will have a higher score. You've got talent.